[GitHub] [beam] pcoet commented on a change in pull request #16919: [BEAM-13976] [Website] Update Home page

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pcoet commented on a change in pull request #16919:
URL: https://github.com/apache/beam/pull/16919#discussion_r821221354



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File path: website/www/site/data/en/graphic.yaml
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@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@
 # See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
 # limitations under the License.
 
-- title: Sources
+- title: Data Sourcing
   body: Beam reads your data from a diverse set of supported sources, no matter if it’s on-prem or in the cloud.
   icon: /images/model-sources-icon.svg
-- title: Processing
-  body: Beam executes your business logic for Batch and Streaming use cases.

Review comment:
       There's no need to capitalize "Batch" and "Streaming".

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/logos/en.yaml
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@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@
 # limitations under the License.
 
 - id: home-logos-title
-  translation: "Supported runners"
\ No newline at end of file
+  translation: "Apache Beam Runs in These Environments"

Review comment:
       Prefer sentence case: "Apache Beam runs in these environments"

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/quotes/en.yaml
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@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@
 # limitations under the License.
 
 - id: home-quotes-title
-  translation: "They tried it out"
\ No newline at end of file
+  translation: "Case Studies Powered by Apache Beam"

Review comment:
       "Case studies powered by Apache Beam"

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/hero/en.yaml
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@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 - id: home-hero-title
   translation: Introducing Apache Beam
 - id: home-hero-heading
-  translation: An advanced unified programming model
+  translation: The Unified Apache Beam Model
 - id: home-hero-subheading
-  translation: Implement batch and streaming data processing jobs that run on any execution engine.
+  translation: The easiest way to do batch and streaming data processing. Write once, run anywhere data processing for mission-critical production workloads. 
 - id: home-hero-button
-  translation: Install Beam
+  translation: Link to GitHub Repo

Review comment:
       "Link to GitHub repo"

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/en.yaml
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@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@
 - id: home-ctas-title
   translation: "Get started"
 - id: home-model-title1
-  translation: "How Does it work?"
+  translation: "How Does It Work?"

Review comment:
       I'd use sentence case ("How does it work?") instead of title case, but this is okay too... better than the previous inconsistent usage.

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/calendar/en.yaml
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@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 # limitations under the License.
 
 - id: home-calendar-title
-  translation: "Stay up to date with Beam"
+  translation: "Stay Up To Date with Beam"

Review comment:
       I'd stick with sentence case instead of title case, but feel free to ignore...

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/en.yaml
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@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@
 - id: home-ctas-title
   translation: "Get started"
 - id: home-model-title1
-  translation: "How Does it work?"
+  translation: "How Does It Work?"
 - id: home-model-title2
-  translation: "Write it in your language of choice - run it anywhere"
+  translation: "You Choose Your Favorite Environment and Programming Language!"

Review comment:
       I'd recommend sentence case instead of title case here.

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/pillars/en.yaml
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@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 # limitations under the License.
 
 - id: home-pillars-title
-  translation: "All about Apache Beam"
+  translation: "Apache Beam Features"

Review comment:
       "Apache Beam features"

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/hero/en.yaml
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@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 - id: home-hero-title
   translation: Introducing Apache Beam
 - id: home-hero-heading
-  translation: An advanced unified programming model
+  translation: The Unified Apache Beam Model

Review comment:
       I'd recommend sentence case here: "The unified Apache Beam model".




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