svn commit: r1835497 - /subversion/site/publish/docs/community-guide/releasing.part.html

[lu...@apache.org]

Author: luke1410
Date: Mon Jul  9 21:18:50 2018
New Revision: 1835497

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1835497&view=rev
Log:
* docs/community-guide/releasing.part.html
  (#tarball-signing): Update following r1835195. Improve phrasing and apply
    minor corrections.

Suggested by: danielsh

Modified:
    subversion/site/publish/docs/community-guide/releasing.part.html

Modified: subversion/site/publish/docs/community-guide/releasing.part.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/subversion/site/publish/docs/community-guide/releasing.part.html?rev=1835497&r1=1835496&r2=1835497&view=diff
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--- subversion/site/publish/docs/community-guide/releasing.part.html (original)
+++ subversion/site/publish/docs/community-guide/releasing.part.html Mon Jul  9 21:18:50 2018
@@ -975,7 +975,7 @@ in the same directory as the tarballs.</
 
 <p>Before a release is officially made public, it must receive three +1 votes
 from members of the Subversion PMC.  In addition, as a matter of project
-policy, we require testing and signatures from at least one PMC members on
+policy, we require testing and signatures from at least one PMC member on
 <em>each</em> of the major platforms we support: Windows and *nix.
 Members of the PMC, as well as enthusiastic community members are encourages to
 download the tarballs from the preliminary distribution location, run the
@@ -986,8 +986,8 @@ should be included in the ASF LDAP insta
 public keys</a> for members of the Subversion PMC is autogenerated from LDAP
 each day.)
 The release manager is encouraged to wait at least 5 days for the signatures
-before rolling the release to allow anybody (planning to) test(ing) the release
-to complete signing the release before it's being rolled.</p>
+before announcing the release to allow anybody testing the version to complete
+signing the release before its announcement.</p>
 
 <p>Signing a tarball means that you assert certain things about it.  When
 announcing your signature, indicate in the mail what steps you've taken to