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Posted to dev@subversion.apache.org by "Henderson, Michael D" <mi...@lmco.com> on 2004/04/21 02:02:23 UTC

[PATCH] [BOOK] Table/Figure reference typos in Chapter 8

Log Message:
Correct typos in table/figure references.

* subversion/doc/book/book/ch08.xml
  Correct typos in table/figure references.

Index: subversion/doc/book/book/ch08.xml
===================================================================
--- subversion/doc/book/book/ch08.xml   (revision 9450)
+++ subversion/doc/book/book/ch08.xml   (working copy)
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
       main layers&mdash;the Repository Layer, the Repository Access
       (RA) Layer, or the Client Layer.  We will examine these layers
       shortly, but first, see our brief inventory of Subversion's
-      libraries in Table 7-1.  For the sake of consistency, we will
+      libraries in Table 8-1.  For the sake of consistency, we will
       refer to the libraries by their extensionless Unix library names
       (e.g.: libsvn_fs, libsvn_wc, mod_dav_svn).</para>

@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
     </table>
 
     <para>The fact that the word <quote>miscellaneous</quote> only
-      appears once in Table 7-1 is a good sign.  The Subversion
+      appears once in Table 8-1 is a good sign.  The Subversion
       development team is serious about making sure that functionality
       lives in the right layer and libraries.  Perhaps the greatest
       advantage of the modular design is its lack of complexity from a
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
         Subversion.  Think of a directory tree as a two-dimensional
         system, where a node's siblings represent a sort of
         left-and-right motion, and descending into subdirectories a
-        downward motion.  Figure 7-2 shows a typical representation of
+        downward motion.  Figure 8-2 shows a typical representation of
         a tree as exactly that.</para>
 
       <figure id="svn-ch8-sect1.1-dia1">
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@
         usually just a revision-to-be), and provides that
         third-dimensional context needed to understand the difference
         between <filename>/foo/bar</filename> in revision 32, and the
-        same path as it exists in revision 98.  Figure 7-3 shows
+        same path as it exists in revision 98.  Figure 8-3 shows
         revision history as an added dimension to the Subversion
         filesystem universe.</para>
 

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Re: [PATCH] [BOOK] Table/Figure reference typos in Chapter 8

Posted by "Brian W. Fitzpatrick" <fi...@red-bean.com>.
Patch looks good, but I'm wondering, "Shouldn't those be xrefs?"

-Fitz

On Tue, 2004-04-20 at 21:02, Henderson, Michael D wrote:
> Log Message:
> Correct typos in table/figure references.
> 
> * subversion/doc/book/book/ch08.xml
>   Correct typos in table/figure references.
> 
> Index: subversion/doc/book/book/ch08.xml
> ===================================================================
> --- subversion/doc/book/book/ch08.xml   (revision 9450)
> +++ subversion/doc/book/book/ch08.xml   (working copy)
> @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
>        main layers&mdash;the Repository Layer, the Repository Access
>        (RA) Layer, or the Client Layer.  We will examine these layers
>        shortly, but first, see our brief inventory of Subversion's
> -      libraries in Table 7-1.  For the sake of consistency, we will
> +      libraries in Table 8-1.  For the sake of consistency, we will
>        refer to the libraries by their extensionless Unix library names
>        (e.g.: libsvn_fs, libsvn_wc, mod_dav_svn).</para>
> 
> @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
>      </table>
>  
>      <para>The fact that the word <quote>miscellaneous</quote> only
> -      appears once in Table 7-1 is a good sign.  The Subversion
> +      appears once in Table 8-1 is a good sign.  The Subversion
>        development team is serious about making sure that functionality
>        lives in the right layer and libraries.  Perhaps the greatest
>        advantage of the modular design is its lack of complexity from a
> @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
>          Subversion.  Think of a directory tree as a two-dimensional
>          system, where a node's siblings represent a sort of
>          left-and-right motion, and descending into subdirectories a
> -        downward motion.  Figure 7-2 shows a typical representation of
> +        downward motion.  Figure 8-2 shows a typical representation of
>          a tree as exactly that.</para>
>  
>        <figure id="svn-ch8-sect1.1-dia1">
> @@ -287,7 +287,7 @@
>          usually just a revision-to-be), and provides that
>          third-dimensional context needed to understand the difference
>          between <filename>/foo/bar</filename> in revision 32, and the
> -        same path as it exists in revision 98.  Figure 7-3 shows
> +        same path as it exists in revision 98.  Figure 8-3 shows
>          revision history as an added dimension to the Subversion
>          filesystem universe.</para>
>  
> 
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