[GitHub] [cloudstack-documentation] shwstppr commented on a change in pull request #179: VMware new additions for deploy-as-is

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shwstppr commented on a change in pull request #179:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/179#discussion_r556264224



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File path: source/adminguide/virtual_machines/virtual_appliances.rst
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@@ -0,0 +1,54 @@
+About Virtual Appliances
+------------------------
+
+CloudStack allows users to deploy virtual appliances on VMware such as its been made directly though vCenter.
+Vendors of virtual appliances for VMware often produce ‘templates’ of their appliances in an OVA format.
+An OVA file contain disc images, as well as the configuration data of the virtual appliance and also at times a EULA which must be acknowledged.
+Virtual Appliances are supported only on VMware.
+
+Deployment options (configurations)
+-----------------------------------
+
+VMware templates can provide different deployment options in their OVF descriptor file. CloudStack obtains
+the different deployment options when the template is registered and it displays them to the users
+in the virtual machine deployment wizard, under the 'Compute Offering' section.
+
+After the user selects a deployment option, CloudStack lists the compute offerings which match or exceed the
+deployment options hardware requirements for CPU and memory.
+
+.. note::
+    All the custom unconstrained compute offerings are displayed, but those constrained custom offerings

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
       All the custom unconstrained compute offerings are displayed, but only those constrained custom offerings
   ```

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File path: source/adminguide/templates.rst
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@@ -237,7 +249,7 @@ To upload a template:
       available, or All Zones to make it available throughout
       CloudStack.
 
-   -  **OS Type**: This helps CloudStack and the hypervisor perform
+   -  **OS Type**: (Except fo VMware). This helps CloudStack and the hypervisor perform

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
      -  **OS Type**: (Except for VMware). This helps CloudStack and the hypervisor perform
   ```




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