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svn commit: r1330457 - in /incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp: docs/index.html xdocs/index.xml

Author: sebawagner
Date: Wed Apr 25 18:12:02 2012
New Revision: 1330457

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1330457&view=rev
Log:
OPENMEETINGS-231 fix some more wording and typos

Modified:
    incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html
    incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml

Modified: incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html?rev=1330457&r1=1330456&r2=1330457&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html (original)
+++ incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html Wed Apr 25 18:12:02 2012
@@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ limitations under the License.
 					<span>
 						<b>Calendar</b>
 						<br />
-						You can create meeting with the integrated calendar
+						You can create meetings with the integrated calendar, conference rooms and invitations are automatically send to everybody
 					</span>
 				</a>
 
@@ -902,10 +902,7 @@ limitations under the License.
 					<span>
 						<b>File Explorer</b>
 						<br />
-						Each room has its own File-Explorer - A drag and drop interface
-						for handling files and folders.
-						Each user has its own private drive that is the same no matter what
-						conference room you go.
+						Each room has its own File-Explorer. Each user has his own private drive and additionally there is a public drive to share files with other participants
 					</span>
 				</a>
 
@@ -914,7 +911,7 @@ limitations under the License.
 					<span>
 						<b>Integration API</b>
 						<br />
-						There is a SOAP/REST API to integrate into your website, as well
+						There is a SOAP/REST API to integrate into your website or intranet, as well
 						as LDAP/ADS connectors and VoIP/Asterisk integration modules
 					</span>
 				</a>
@@ -942,11 +939,11 @@ limitations under the License.
 				<a href="#">
 					<img src="images/cut_recordings_playback.png" alt="Share and Record" />
 					<span>
-						<b>Screensharing and Recording</b>
+						<b>Screen sharing and Recording</b>
 						<br />
-						You can do screensharing as well as recording whole sessions
-						including audio/video and download the recordings as AVI or FLV or
-						watch directly in the integrated recordings playback UI.
+						You can do screen sharing as well as recording of whole sessions
+						including audio/vide. Recordings can be downloaded as AVI/FLV or
+						watched online in the integrated player.
 					</span>
 				</a>
 

Modified: incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml?rev=1330457&r1=1330456&r2=1330457&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml (original)
+++ incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml Wed Apr 25 18:12:02 2012
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 					<span>
 						<b>Calendar</b>
 						<br />
-						You can create meeting with the integrated calendar
+						You can create meetings with the integrated calendar, conference rooms and invitations are automatically send to everybody
 					</span>
 				</a>
 
@@ -43,10 +43,7 @@
 					<span>
 						<b>File Explorer</b>
 						<br />
-						Each room has its own File-Explorer - A drag and drop interface
-						for handling files and folders.
-						Each user has its own private drive that is the same no matter what
-						conference room you go.
+						Each room has its own File-Explorer. Each user has his own private drive and additionally there is a public drive to share files with other participants
 					</span>
 				</a>
 
@@ -55,7 +52,7 @@
 					<span>
 						<b>Integration API</b>
 						<br />
-						There is a SOAP/REST API to integrate into your website, as well
+						There is a SOAP/REST API to integrate into your website or intranet, as well
 						as LDAP/ADS connectors and VoIP/Asterisk integration modules
 					</span>
 				</a>
@@ -83,11 +80,11 @@
 				<a href="#">
 					<img src="images/cut_recordings_playback.png" alt="Share and Record" />
 					<span>
-						<b>Screensharing and Recording</b>
+						<b>Screen sharing and Recording</b>
 						<br />
-						You can do screensharing as well as recording whole sessions
-						including audio/video and download the recordings as AVI or FLV or
-						watch directly in the integrated recordings playback UI.
+						You can do screen sharing as well as recording of whole sessions
+						including audio/vide. Recordings can be downloaded as AVI/FLV or
+						watched online in the integrated player.
 					</span>
 				</a>