[GitHub] [pulsar] Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #5111: [doc] Improve Pulsar deployment bare metal

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Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #5111: [doc] Improve Pulsar deployment bare metal
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5111#discussion_r320781606
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/deploy-bare-metal.md
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 @@ -95,20 +95,19 @@ The untarred directory contains the following subdirectories:
 
 Directory | Contains
 :---------|:--------
-`bin` | Pulsar's [command-line tools](reference-cli-tools.md), such as [`pulsar`](reference-cli-tools.md#pulsar) and [`pulsar-admin`](reference-pulsar-admin.md)
+`bin` |[command-line tools](reference-cli-tools.md) of Pulsar, such as [`pulsar`](reference-cli-tools.md#pulsar) and [`pulsar-admin`](reference-pulsar-admin.md)
 `conf` | Configuration files for Pulsar, including for [broker configuration](reference-configuration.md#broker), [ZooKeeper configuration](reference-configuration.md#zookeeper), and more
-`data` | The data storage directory used by ZooKeeper and BookKeeper.
-`lib` | The [JAR](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/JAR_(file_format)) files used by Pulsar.
-`logs` | Logs created by the installation.
+`data` | The data storage directory that ZooKeeper and BookKeeper use
+`lib` | The [JAR](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/JAR_(file_format)) files that Pulsar uses
+`logs` | Logs that the installation creates
 
-## Installing Builtin Connectors (optional)
+## Install Builtin Connectors (optional)
 
 Review comment:
   This part is the same as https://pulsar.apache.org/docs/en/next/standalone/#install-builtin-connectors-optional, you can add a link here.

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