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Posted to docs@httpd.apache.org by Carsten Gaebler <cg...@schlund.de> on 2004/10/09 13:25:42 UTC

[PATCH] to make German 412 more catchy

Hi,

I've just read the German version of the 412 Precondition Failed error message 
for Apache 2 and I think it needs to be changed. I read it several times and I 
didn't understand it until I read RFC 2068. It sounds pretty officialese, so I 
came up with a more catchy version. See below.

By the way, I'm currently working on a Zulu translation of the error documents. 
When I'm finished should I submit the patches all in one single mail or one by one?

Regards
Carsten.



Index: HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/cvspublic/httpd-2.0/docs/error/HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var,v
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -r1.17 HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var
--- HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var	19 Apr 2004 17:03:42 -0000	1.17
+++ HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var	9 Oct 2004 11:08:36 -0000
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@
  Content-type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
  Body:----------de--
  <!--#set var="CONTENT_LANGUAGE" value="de"
---><!--#set var="TITLE" value="Vorbedingung negativ!"
+--><!--#set var="TITLE" value="Vorbedingung verfehlt!"
  --><!--#include virtual="include/top.html" -->

-    Die Vorbedingung unter dem angeforderten URL wurde
-    negativ ausgewertet.
+    Die f&uuml;r den Abruf der angeforderten URL notwendige
+    Vorbedingung wurde nicht erf&uuml;llt.

  <!--#include virtual="include/bottom.html" -->
  ----------de--

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Re: [PATCH] to make German 412 more catchy

Posted by Carsten Gaebler <cg...@schlund.de>.

On 10/11/2004 09:29 PM, Erik Abele wrote:
> Yes, IMHO this is more suitable here and I just went ahead and  
> committed it.

And corrected the duplicate title tag. :-) Thanks.

> I don't think there's a reviewer for Zulu on this list

I feared that, which is why I hope to discuss it on my dictionary forum 
at http://isizulu.net/forum/ first.

cg.

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Re: [PATCH] to make German 412 more catchy

Posted by Erik Abele <er...@codefaktor.de>.

On 09.10.2004, at 13:25, Carsten Gaebler wrote:

> Hi,
>
> I've just read the German version of the 412 Precondition Failed error  
> message for Apache 2 and I think it needs to be changed. I read it  
> several times and I didn't understand it until I read RFC 2068. It  
> sounds pretty officialese, so I came up with a more catchy version.  
> See below.

Yes, IMHO this is more suitable here and I just went ahead and  
committed it. Thanks.

> By the way, I'm currently working on a Zulu translation of the error  
> documents. When I'm finished should I submit the patches all in one  
> single mail or one by one?

I don't think there's a reviewer for Zulu on this list but if I'd fall  
into this category, I'd prefer a single mail instead of 10 or more...  
;)

Cheers,
Erik

> Regards
> Carsten.
>
>
>
> Index: HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var
> ===================================================================
> RCS file:  
> /home/cvspublic/httpd-2.0/docs/error/ 
> HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var,v
> retrieving revision 1.17
> diff -u -r1.17 HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var
> --- HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var	19 Apr 2004 17:03:42 -0000	1.17
> +++ HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED.html.var	9 Oct 2004 11:08:36 -0000
> @@ -16,11 +16,11 @@
>  Content-type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
>  Body:----------de--
>  <!--#set var="CONTENT_LANGUAGE" value="de"
> ---><!--#set var="TITLE" value="Vorbedingung negativ!"
> +--><!--#set var="TITLE" value="Vorbedingung verfehlt!"
>  --><!--#include virtual="include/top.html" -->
>
> -    Die Vorbedingung unter dem angeforderten URL wurde
> -    negativ ausgewertet.
> +    Die f&uuml;r den Abruf der angeforderten URL notwendige
> +    Vorbedingung wurde nicht erf&uuml;llt.
>
>  <!--#include virtual="include/bottom.html" -->
>  ----------de--
>
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Re: [PATCH] to make German 412 more catchy

Posted by André Malo <nd...@perlig.de>.

* Michael.Schroepl@telekurs.de wrote:

> Does your RFC version contain any information about how to ask for these 
> preconditions?
> I used RFC2616 to check but section 10.4.13 doesn contain any link to 
> other headers which might be used for this purpose.

Headers used for preconditions are If-Match, If-Unmodified-Since and
If-None-Match. Additionally the 412 status is used for some DAV operation
preconditions.

httpd-2.0> grep -r HTTP_PRECONDITION_FAILED *

:-)

nd

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Re: [PATCH] to make German 412 more catchy

Posted by Mi...@telekurs.de.

> I've just read the German version of the 412 Precondition Failed error 
message
> for Apache 2 and I think it needs to be changed. I read it several times 
and I
> didn't understand it until I read RFC 2068. It sounds pretty 
officialese, so I
> came up with a more catchy version. See below.

> -    Die Vorbedingung unter dem angeforderten URL wurde
> -    negativ ausgewertet.
> +    Die f&uuml;r den Abruf der angeforderten URL notwendige
> +    Vorbedingung wurde nicht erf&uuml;llt.

Yep, sounds better to me as well.

Does your RFC version contain any information about how to ask for these 
preconditions?
I used RFC2616 to check but section 10.4.13 doesn contain any link to 
other headers
which might be used for this purpose.

Regards, Michael

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