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Posted to license@apache.org by "Roy T. Fielding" <fi...@apache.org> on 2003/12/24 13:16:06 UTC

Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Thank you all for your comments on the proposed license.  I have
incorporated as much of the changes as possible and posted a new
version on the site

     http://www.apache.org/licenses/proposed/

Note that I have only updated the proposed 2.0 and Individual CLA
licenses so far -- the others will have to wait until I find some
time during the holidays.  I include the current revision (1.23)
below for your convenience.

Cheers,

Roy T. Fielding, co-founder, The Apache Software Foundation
                  (fielding@apache.org)  <http://roy.gbiv.com/>


     
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Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by Don Armstrong <do...@donarmstrong.com>.
On Fri, 09 Jan 2004, Brian Behlendorf wrote:
> Eben reviewed a draft of the 2.0 license on November 14th,
> Message-ID: <16...@new.law.columbia.edu>, I can
> send you a copy or you can find it in the archive here:

Yes, that was the revision where the patent reciprocity clause was in
§5 (now §3, assuming I remember correctly). At that time, he noted
that §5 was in conflict with the GPL.

> In doing so I believe we addressed the two issues that affected GPL
> compliance, but I asked Eben earlier this week if he could take one
> last look at the current 2.0 draft.

I definetly think the current draft is closer to GPL compatibility
than the draft as of November 14th, but I'm still of the opinion that
ASL §3 conflicts with GPL §7. Hopefully Eben will be able to either
put my concerns to rest, or clarify the nature of the conflict if it
actually exists.


Don Armstrong

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RE: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by "Noel J. Bergman" <no...@devtech.com>.
Brian Behlendorf wrote:

> Eben reviewed a draft of the 2.0 license on November 14th, Message-ID:
> <16...@new.law.columbia.edu>, I can send you a
> copy or you can find it in the archive here:

http://mail-archives.apache.org/eyebrowse/ReadMsg?listName=license@apache.or
g&msgNo=69

	--- Noel


Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by Brian Behlendorf <br...@collab.net>.
On Wed, 7 Jan 2004, Don Armstrong wrote:
> On Wed, 07 Jan 2004, Brian Behlendorf wrote:
> > Since I believe this license is compatible with the GPL,
>
> The second half of section 3 is quite likely not compatible with the
> GPL, as it imposes a further restriction upon redistribution that is
> not present in the GPL itself. [From my reading, it conflicts directly
> with the language of section 7 of the GPL.]

Eben reviewed a draft of the 2.0 license on November 14th, Message-ID:
<16...@new.law.columbia.edu>, I can send you a copy or
you can find it in the archive here:

http://www.apache.org/mail/license/200311.gz

He did make a comment about the patent language, asking that we narrow the
scope of the termination from applying to actions taken against any
software, to the Work itself, and we agreed that this was a good
suggestion and made the change.  We also incorporated his other
suggestion from that email.  In doing so I believe we addressed the two
issues that affected GPL compliance, but I asked Eben earlier this week if
he could take one last look at the current 2.0 draft.

	Brian



Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by Don Armstrong <do...@donarmstrong.com>.
On Wed, 07 Jan 2004, Brian Behlendorf wrote:
> Since I believe this license is compatible with the GPL,

The second half of section 3 is quite likely not compatible with the
GPL, as it imposes a further restriction upon redistribution that is
not present in the GPL itself. [From my reading, it conflicts directly
with the language of section 7 of the GPL.]

I'm not aware if compatibility with the GPL is a necesary quality for
the ASL to have, but if it is, it seemingly does not have it.

Perhaps Eben Moglen [Cc:'d in case he is not subscribed] would be
willing to make a more in depth commentary upon this?


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Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by David Crossley <cr...@apache.org>.
Roy T. Fielding wrote:
> > I would like to support all this. Whitespace is not a minor issue.
> > Inconsistencies wreak havoc on CVS diffs. It seems that some
> > text editors try to correct these inconsistencies (e.g. to change
> > any 3-space indentation back to 2-space indentation) which results
> > in an unnecessary and confusing diff.
> >
> > * The main license has 2-space indentation which is great. However
> > some lines have an odd number of spaces, e.g. the first line here
> > incorrectly has 3 spaces while the second line correctly has 6 spaces.
> 
> The entire license has 3-space indentation, except where indentation
> is being used to show hierarchy.  My editor does not suffer from the
> problem you describe and I do not expect anyone else to be editing
> the license text (at least not with a broken editor).

The reason for my comments about inconsistent whitespace is that
we have seen big troubles in CVS with the license header at the
top of *.java files etc. Some people have text editors that have
capabilities to automatically "correct" whitespace and this causes
mangled diffs.

--David



Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by "Roy T. Fielding" <fi...@apache.org>.
> I would like to support all this. Whitespace is not a minor issue.
> Inconsistencies wreak havoc on CVS diffs. It seems that some
> text editors try to correct these inconsistencies (e.g. to change
> any 3-space indentation back to 2-space indentation) which results
> in an unnecessary and confusing diff.
>
> * The main license has 2-space indentation which is great. However
> some lines have an odd number of spaces, e.g. the first line here
> incorrectly has 3 spaces while the second line correctly has 6 spaces.

The entire license has 3-space indentation, except where indentation
is being used to show hierarchy.  My editor does not suffer from the
problem you describe and I do not expect anyone else to be editing
the license text (at least not with a broken editor).

....Roy


Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by David Crossley <cr...@apache.org>.
Dave Hodder wrote:
>
> A very minor comment: I think the paragraphs need to be rejustified
> before the final release.  (Some of the lines in Section 1 are 77
> columns wide where as the first line of Section 7 is wrapping at less
> than 73 columns.)
<snip/>
> The following diff may or may not be of use; it mostly relates to the
> Appendix and (i) removes what I believe is a superfluous space; (ii)
> rejustifies the template to 71 columns and (iii) removes a few empty
> newlines from the very bottom of the file:

I would like to support all this. Whitespace is not a minor issue.
Inconsistencies wreak havoc on CVS diffs. It seems that some
text editors try to correct these inconsistencies (e.g. to change
any 3-space indentation back to 2-space indentation) which results
in an unnecessary and confusing diff.

* The main license has 2-space indentation which is great. However
some lines have an odd number of spaces, e.g. the first line here
incorrectly has 3 spaces while the second line correctly has 6 spaces.
------
   3. Grant of Patent License. Subject to the terms and conditions of
      this License, each Contributor hereby grants to You a perpetual,
------

* The example "copyright" line has one double-space in the middle
of the text.

* The NOTICEs sections incorrectly have 3-space indentation.

* Some other licenses (e.g. cla.txt) have 3-space indentation
rather than 2-space.

* I checked some licences for trailing spaces at end-of-lines
and they seemed fine, but i did not check all licenses.

--David



Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by "Roy T. Fielding" <fi...@gbiv.com>.
> A very minor comment: I think the paragraphs need to be rejustified
> before the final release.  (Some of the lines in Section 1 are 77
> columns wide where as the first line of Section 7 is wrapping at less
> than 73 columns.)

They were manually justified in order to make them easier to read,
depending more on the length and substance of the paragraph rather
than a mechanical column number.

The nominal indentation is three spaces on both margins and the 
numbering
is presented as if it were an outline, again for ease of reading.
That is simply a personal preference of mine.

> I notice the sample NOTICE file has differing justification between
> notices too, and that the Apache acknowledgement changes from
>
>     This product includes software developed by the
>     Apache Software Foundation (http://www.apache.org/).
>
> in Apache Software License v1.1 to
>
>     This product includes software developed by
>     The Apache Software Foundation (http://www.apache.org/).
>     ^
> in Apache License v2.0.  (Note the word "the" has changed to start with
> an upper case letter.)

The legal name of the foundation is "The Apache Software Foundation".

....Roy


Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by Dave Hodder <dm...@dmh.org.uk>.
Hello,

A very minor comment: I think the paragraphs need to be rejustified
before the final release.  (Some of the lines in Section 1 are 77
columns wide where as the first line of Section 7 is wrapping at less
than 73 columns.)

I notice the sample NOTICE file has differing justification between
notices too, and that the Apache acknowledgement changes from

     This product includes software developed by the
     Apache Software Foundation (http://www.apache.org/).

in Apache Software License v1.1 to

     This product includes software developed by
     The Apache Software Foundation (http://www.apache.org/).
     ^
in Apache License v2.0.  (Note the word "the" has changed to start with
an upper case letter.)

The following diff may or may not be of use; it mostly relates to the
Appendix and (i) removes what I believe is a superfluous space; (ii)
rejustifies the template to 71 columns and (iii) removes a few empty
newlines from the very bottom of the file:

--- LICENSE-2.0.txt	2004-01-14 21:21:36.000000000 +0000
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@@ -200,17 +200,17 @@

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+   Licensed under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the "License"); you
+   may not use this file except in compliance with the License. You may
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@@ -232,5 +232,4 @@
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     available from
-      ftp://ftp.csx.cam.ac.uk/pub/software/programming/pcre/
-
+      ftp://ftp.csx.cam.ac.uk/pub/software/programming/pcre/
\ No newline at end of file


Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by "Roy T. Fielding" <fi...@apache.org>.
> The suggested change has been applied to make rev 1.24, along with
> an update of the month to January 2004.  There are no other changes.

Of course, I remembered another change needed just after sending that
message, though it isn't to the license text itself.  The template for
giving the copyright line has been changed (rev 1.25) to remove the
use of "(C)" after the word Copyright, since only the word itself or the
real circled-c symbol are valid under international law.

....Roy


Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by "Roy T. Fielding" <fi...@apache.org>.
The suggested change has been applied to make rev 1.24, along with
an update of the month to January 2004.  There are no other changes.

diff -u -r1.23 -r1.24
--- LICENSE-2.0.txt     24 Dec 2003 12:06:34 -0000      1.23
+++ LICENSE-2.0.txt     14 Jan 2004 20:18:32 -0000      1.24
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
      
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+                           Version 2.0, January 2004
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@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
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-      "Contribution" shall mean any original work of authorship,  
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+      "Contribution" shall mean any work of authorship, including
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additions
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owner
@@ -145,8 +145,7 @@
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-      with Licensor regarding such Contributions. You should not submit
-      as a "Contribution" any work that is not Your original creation.
+      with Licensor regarding such Contributions.


....Roy


Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by Brian Behlendorf <br...@collab.net>.
On Wed, 24 Dec 2003, Roy T. Fielding wrote:
> Thank you all for your comments on the proposed license.  I have
> incorporated as much of the changes as possible and posted a new
> version on the site
>
>      http://www.apache.org/licenses/proposed/

This is *almost* perfect.  I'm worried about the definition of
"Contribution" and section 5, as it pertains to someone making a
Contribution that is actually someone else's "original work", but which
carries a license that allows the code to be contributed.  I propose the
following diff, leaving paragraph justification to a later change for
clarity, and removing what seems like a redundant statement in section 5,
since "should" would never be accurate anyways - either you must not, or
there are certain conditions under which you may.  And it has the nice
side-effect of stripping out 16 more words.  :)



Index: LICENSE-2.0.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/cvs/site/docs/licenses/proposed/LICENSE-2.0.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -r1.23 LICENSE-2.0.txt
60c60
<       "Contribution" shall mean any original work of authorship,
including
---
>       "Contribution" shall mean any work of authorship, including
148,149c148
<       with Licensor regarding such Contributions. You should not submit
<       as a "Contribution" any work that is not Your original creation.
---
>       with Licensor regarding such Contributions.



Since I believe this license is compatible with the GPL, and I believe we
have hashed this out quite a bit and addressed the best possible position
between a number of proposed alternatives, I am prepared (whether or not
my change is adopted) to make a proposal to the board to officially
endorse these new licenses at the next Board meeting, which is January
21st.  That will bring this very long process to a close.  Speak up now,
with clear and as-concise-as-possible proposed last-minute changes.

	Brian


Re: Review of proposed Apache License, version 2.0

Posted by Jason Wies <ja...@xc.net>.
There is still one area that needs clarification.

On Wed, Dec 24, 2003 at 04:16:06AM -0800, Roy T. Fielding wrote:
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>    5. Submission of Contributions. Unless You explicitly state  
>	otherwise, any Contribution intentionally submitted for
>	inclusion in the Work by You to the Licensor shall be under the terms
>	and conditions of this License, without any additional terms or
>	conditions.  Notwithstanding the above, nothing herein shall supersede
>	or  modify the terms of any separate license agreement you may have
>	executed with Licensor regarding such Contributions. ___You should not
>	submit as a "Contribution" any work that is not Your original
>	creation___.

By stating "original" work you most likely are trying to avoid
submissions of strictly licensed code that can't be legally used.  I
think that case is covered by rest of that section, and certainly
submissions of code not written recently or not written with Apache in
mind are still welcome (e.g. compression algorithms, fast lookup code,
etc.).  "Original work" seems to exclude those contributions, if not
legally then in spirit.

And the last sentence of section 5 doesn't match up with the
definition of Contribution.  Submitting good code that doesn't happen
to be your original creation should be encouraged, so long as the
authorization to submit in section 1 is obtained or permitted by
license.

Jason