svn commit: r482214 - in /jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt: index.apt news.apt status.apt

[ro...@apache.org]

Author: rolandw
Date: Mon Dec  4 07:20:00 2006
New Revision: 482214

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=482214
Log:
minor updates to the site

Modified:
    jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/index.apt
    jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/news.apt
    jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/status.apt

Modified: jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/index.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/index.apt?view=diff&rev=482214&r1=482213&r2=482214
==============================================================================
--- jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/index.apt (original)
+++ jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/index.apt Mon Dec  4 07:20:00 2006
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
     Although the java.net package provides basic functionality for accessing resources via HTTP, 
     it doesn't provide the full flexibility or functionality needed by many applications. The 
-    Jakarta HttpComponents seeks to fill this void by providing an efficient, up-to-date, and 
+    Jakarta HttpComponents seek to fill this void by providing an efficient, up-to-date, and 
     feature-rich set of components that can be used to assemble custom, standards compliant 
     client- and server-side HTTP services.
 
@@ -48,17 +48,17 @@
 
 Commons HttpClient
 
-    Jakarta HttpComponents project is charged with developing and maintaining 
+    The Jakarta HttpComponents project is charged with developing and maintaining 
     {{{http://jakarta.apache.org/commons/httpclient/index.html}Commons HttpClient}}.
     Commons HttpClient is the current stable library of choice for most users.
-    Commons HttpClient 3 series will be maintained until Jakarta HttpClient 4 is 
+    Commons HttpClient 3 will be maintained until Jakarta HttpClient 4 is 
     deemed stable enough to supersede it for use in production.
 
 HttpComponents Modules
 
-    HttpComponents is in the process of developing low-level libraries for several 
-    aspects of the HTTP protocol. Users with advanced needs in server- or clientside HTTP
-    communication, may find this a useful toolset to build custom HTTP services.
+    The HttpComponents project is in the process of developing low-level libraries for several 
+    aspects of the HTTP protocol. Users with advanced needs in server- or client-side HTTP
+    communication may find this a useful toolset to build custom HTTP services.
 
 * HttpCore
 
@@ -80,17 +80,17 @@
     I/O (NIO) model. HttpCore NIO extensions require a Java 1.4 compatible runtime and the HttpCore 
     base module.
 
-    NIO model proved inferior to the classic I/O model in terms of raw performance when the number of 
+    The NIO model proved inferior to the classic I/O model in terms of raw performance when the number of 
     simultaneous HTTP connections is moderate (several hundreds) or when the content is meant to be 
-    produced / consumed using standard java.io.OutputStream / java.io.InputStream interfaces such as 
-    Servlet API. HttpCore NIO extensions are intended for those use scenarios where raw throughput 
-    is less important than ability to handle thousands of simultaneous HTTP connections in a resource 
+    produced/consumed using standard java.io.OutputStream/java.io.InputStream interfaces such as the
+    Servlet API. HttpCore NIO extensions are intended for those usage scenarios where raw throughput 
+    is less important than the ability to handle thousands of simultaneous HTTP connections in a resource 
     efficient manner.
 
 * HttpAsync
 
-    The {{{http-async/index.html}HttpAsync}} module provides an asynchronous interface for client 
-    side HTTP communication, which separates the sending of a request from the receiving of the 
+    {{{http-async/index.html}HttpAsync}} will provide an asynchronous interface for client 
+    side HTTP communication which separates the sending of a request from the receiving of the 
     response. This simplifies development of multithreaded HTTP applications and allows for new 
     features such as pipelining.
 
@@ -112,8 +112,8 @@
 
 * HttpClient
 
-    Jakarta HttpClient developed by HttpComponents project will serve as an easy to use facade to the 
-    lower level components of HttpCore, HttpAuth, HttpCookie, HttpConn and is intended as a successor 
-    and a replacement for 
+    Jakarta HttpClient developed by the HttpComponents project will serve as an easy to use facade to the 
+    lower level components of HttpCore, HttpAuth, HttpCookie, and HttpConn. It is intended as successor of
+    and replacement for 
     {{{http://jakarta.apache.org/commons/httpclient/index.html}Jakarta Commons HttpClient 3.x}}
 

Modified: jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/news.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/news.apt?view=diff&rev=482214&r1=482213&r2=482214
==============================================================================
--- jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/news.apt (original)
+++ jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/news.apt Mon Dec  4 07:20:00 2006
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 * 6 December 2006 - HttpComponents HttpCore 4.0-alpha3 released 
 
-    The third ALPHA version of HttpCore has been released. ALPHA3 release includes a number of API
+    The third ALPHA version of HttpCore has been released. The ALPHA3 release includes a number of API
     optimizations and improvements and introduces a set of NIO extensions to the HttpCore API. 
     NIO extensions can be used to build HTTP services intended to handle thousands of simultaneous 
     connections with a small number of I/O threads.

Modified: jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/status.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/status.apt?view=diff&rev=482214&r1=482213&r2=482214
==============================================================================
--- jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/status.apt (original)
+++ jakarta/httpcomponents/project/src/site/apt/status.apt Mon Dec  4 07:20:00 2006
@@ -23,17 +23,17 @@
 
 * HttpComponents HttpCore 4.0
 
-    The major part of redesign of the core HTTP components has been completed. The new API is ready for review 
+    The major part of the redesign of the core HTTP component has been completed. The new API is ready for review 
     and use in experimental projects. The API is still deemed unstable and it can still undergo significant 
     changes based on the feedback from early adopters. 
 
-    The ALPHA3 release included a number of API optimizations and improvements. It also introduced a set of 
+    The ALPHA3 release includes a number of API optimizations and improvements. It also introduces a set of 
     extensions to the base HttpCore API based on NIO (non-blocking I/O model). NIO extensions can be used to 
     build HTTP services intended to handle thousands of simultaneous connections with a small number 
     of I/O threads.
 
-    The HttpCore components will form the foundation of the future releases of Jakarta HttpClient and can also 
-    be used separately to build custom client and server side HTTP services.
+    The HttpCore component will form the foundation of the future releases of Jakarta HttpClient and can also 
+    be used separately to build custom client- and server-side HTTP services.
 
 * HttpComponents HttpClient 4.0