[maven-site] branch several updated: https URLs and minor copy edits

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     new ae114d12 https URLs and minor copy edits
ae114d12 is described below

commit ae114d125f88c28d90efecdd08f1bb70d374b997
Author: Elliotte Rusty Harold <el...@ibiblio.org>
AuthorDate: Sun Jan 1 08:45:36 2023 -0500

    https URLs and minor copy edits
---
 content/apt/developers/committer-environment.apt | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/apt/developers/committer-environment.apt b/content/apt/developers/committer-environment.apt
index a527e9b0..9247e4e1 100644
--- a/content/apt/developers/committer-environment.apt
+++ b/content/apt/developers/committer-environment.apt
@@ -30,14 +30,14 @@ Committer Environment
 
 * Introduction
 
- This document is intended to set up the Maven committer environment.
+ This document describes how to set up the Maven committer environment.
 
 * Source File Encoding
 
  When editing source files, make sure you use the right file encoding. For the Maven project, UTF-8 has been chosen
- as the default file encoding. UTF-8 is an encoding scheme for the Unicode character set and as such allows to encode
- all characters that Java can handle. The source files should not contain the byte order mark (BOM). There can be
- exceptions to this general rule, e.g. properties files are usually encoded using ISO-8859-1 as per the JRE API, so
+ as the default file encoding. UTF-8 is an encoding scheme for the Unicode character set that can encode
+ all characters that Java can handle. The source files should not contain the byte order mark (BOM). There are
+ exceptions to this general rule. For instance, properties files are encoded using ISO-8859-1 as per the JRE API, so
  please keep this in mind, too.
 
 * Maven Code Style
@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ Committer Environment
 
 * Useful software
 
- The Maven Team uses several software. Here is a partial list:
+ The Maven Team uses assorted software. Here is a partial list:
 
- * {{{http://www.cygwin.com/}Cygwin}}: collection of free software tools to allow various versions of Microsoft
+ * {{{https://www.cygwin.com/}Cygwin}}: collection of free software tools that allow various versions of Microsoft
    Windows to act somewhat like a Unix system
 
- * {{{http://www.gnupg.org/}GnuPG}}: GNU Privacy Guard.
+ * {{{https://www.gnupg.org/}GnuPG}}: GNU Privacy Guard.