[GitHub] [shardingsphere] tuohai666 commented on a change in pull request #6327: Translate the committer.en.md from committer.cn.md

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tuohai666 commented on a change in pull request #6327:
URL: https://github.com/apache/shardingsphere/pull/6327#discussion_r453534615



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File path: docs/blog/content/material/committer.en.md
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@@ -3,5 +3,87 @@ title = "3.Would you like to become an Apache committer"
 weight = 4
 chapter = true
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+## Would you like to become an Apache committer
 
-## TODO
+### What is the Apache Software Foundation？
+
+The Apache Software Foundation (Apache Software Foundation) is today's most influential non-profit open source software project organization. It was formally established in 1999 and is mainly composed of groups of developers and users. Under the leadership of the Apache Software Foundation, more than 350 top open source projects have graduated, including Apache HTTP Server, the world's most famous web server software. Adhering to the spirit of "openness, innovation and community", many Apache projects have established a strong and successful ecosystem, and the community is full of vitality.
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+In addition to many projects that are very influential in the field of information technology, the Apache License (Apache License), Apache Contributor Agreement License (CLAs) and the open cooperation model (Apache Way) also have outstanding contributions in the industry and their influence far beyond the Apache Software Foundation.
+
+The Apache Software Foundation is now the cornerstone of the modern open source software ecosystem.
+
+### Why become an Apache committer？
+
+Having said that, no matter how much you have learned about the Apache Software Foundation before, you can see that this is an extremely influential organization and widely recognized in the industry.
+
+If you can become an officially recognized commuter, it is not only a great recognition of yourself, which you have the ability to participate in Apache-level project development and make a tangible contribution; but also it can also be widely respected in the industry, whether it is for job search It's helpful to get promoted or raise a salary.

Review comment:
       but also it can also

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File path: docs/blog/content/material/committer.en.md
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@@ -3,5 +3,87 @@ title = "3.Would you like to become an Apache committer"
 weight = 4
 chapter = true
 +++
+## Would you like to become an Apache committer
 
-## TODO
+### What is the Apache Software Foundation？
+
+The Apache Software Foundation (Apache Software Foundation) is today's most influential non-profit open source software project organization. It was formally established in 1999 and is mainly composed of groups of developers and users. Under the leadership of the Apache Software Foundation, more than 350 top open source projects have graduated, including Apache HTTP Server, the world's most famous web server software. Adhering to the spirit of "openness, innovation and community", many Apache projects have established a strong and successful ecosystem, and the community is full of vitality.
+
+In addition to many projects that are very influential in the field of information technology, the Apache License (Apache License), Apache Contributor Agreement License (CLAs) and the open cooperation model (Apache Way) also have outstanding contributions in the industry and their influence far beyond the Apache Software Foundation.
+
+The Apache Software Foundation is now the cornerstone of the modern open source software ecosystem.
+
+### Why become an Apache committer？
+
+Having said that, no matter how much you have learned about the Apache Software Foundation before, you can see that this is an extremely influential organization and widely recognized in the industry.
+
+If you can become an officially recognized commuter, it is not only a great recognition of yourself, which you have the ability to participate in Apache-level project development and make a tangible contribution; but also it can also be widely respected in the industry, whether it is for job search It's helpful to get promoted or raise a salary.

Review comment:
       commuter -> committer

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File path: docs/blog/content/material/committer.en.md
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@@ -3,5 +3,87 @@ title = "3.Would you like to become an Apache committer"
 weight = 4
 chapter = true
 +++
+## Would you like to become an Apache committer
 
-## TODO
+### What is the Apache Software Foundation？
+
+The Apache Software Foundation (Apache Software Foundation) is today's most influential non-profit open source software project organization. It was formally established in 1999 and is mainly composed of groups of developers and users. Under the leadership of the Apache Software Foundation, more than 350 top open source projects have graduated, including Apache HTTP Server, the world's most famous web server software. Adhering to the spirit of "openness, innovation and community", many Apache projects have established a strong and successful ecosystem, and the community is full of vitality.

Review comment:
       **today's** is not the right grammar. Please move **today** to the end of the first sentence.




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