svn commit: r328728 - /httpd/httpd/trunk/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml

[co...@apache.org]

Author: colm
Date: Wed Oct 26 14:03:32 2005
New Revision: 328728

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?rev=328728&view=rev
Log:
Minor language fixes:

    * Correct a grammar mistake
    * Make my own English more cromulent
    * Use GB to express Gigabytes rather than Gb, which usually
      means Gigabits.

Modified:
    httpd/httpd/trunk/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml

Modified: httpd/httpd/trunk/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/httpd/httpd/trunk/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml?rev=328728&r1=328727&r2=328728&view=diff
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--- httpd/httpd/trunk/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml (original)
+++ httpd/httpd/trunk/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml Wed Oct 26 14:03:32 2005
@@ -43,16 +43,16 @@
 
       <dt>Caching</dt>
       <dd><module>mod_cache</module>, <module>mod_disk_cache</module>, and
-          <module>mod_mem_cache</module> have undergone a lot of changes
+          <module>mod_mem_cache</module> have undergone a lot of changes, and
           are now considered production-quality. <program>htcacheclean</program>
-          has been introduced to cleanup <module>mod_disk_cache</module>
+          has been introduced to clean up <module>mod_disk_cache</module>
           setups.</dd>
 
       <dt>Configuration</dt>
       <dd>The default configuration layout has been simplified and
-          modularised. Configuration snippets which assist with enabling 
-          commonly used features are now bundled and easily included in the 
-          main server configuration.</dd>
+          modularised. Configuration snippets which can be used to 
+          enable commonly-used features are now bundled with Apache, and 
+          can be easily added to the main server config.</dd>
 
       <dt>Graceful stop</dt>
       <dd>The <module>prefork</module>, <module>worker</module> and 
@@ -88,8 +88,8 @@
 
       <dt>Large File Support</dt>
 
-      <dd>httpd is now built with support for files larger than 2Gb on
-          modern 32-bit Unix systems.  Support for handling &gt;2Gb request
+      <dd>httpd is now built with support for files larger than 2GB on
+          modern 32-bit Unix systems.  Support for handling &gt;2GB request
           bodies has also been added.</dd>
 
       <dt>Event MPM</dt>