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Posted to dev@subversion.apache.org by pl...@lanminds.com on 2003/02/07 19:59:51 UTC
[ PATCH ] Docs chapter 3
And here's chapter 3. A little more going on in this one. As I
explained to Ben via private e-mail, I did 4 basic things:
1. In chps 2/3 I replaced all occurences of 'A svn...'
with 'An svn...' since it seems to flow a little easier
when reading it.
2. Changed a couple paragraphs to read a little better.
This includes adding a couple of itemized lists where I
think the infomation is better presented that way than
being buried in a paragraph form.
3. Fixed the occasional typo
4. Added a bunch of comment blocks explaining:
- why I did what I did
- why I don't like something
- what more is needed to clarify something
- and occasionally, how I think you could fix things :)
Also, as mentioned to Ben, I can either provide my feedback in patch
format, or qualitatively describe things, but that will take a little
longer. Feel free to tell me what you want me to tell you :)
Seeya,
Paul