[jira] [Commented] (SAMZA-136) Copy-editing documentation

["Chris Riccomini (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>]

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Chris Riccomini commented on SAMZA-136:
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Posted comments on the RB. In general, seems like your changes are much clearer than previous documentation.

Also, for final commit, could you use git diff with --binary to include the images directly in the patch?

> Copy-editing documentation
> --------------------------
>
>                 Key: SAMZA-136
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/SAMZA-136
>             Project: Samza
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: docs
>    Affects Versions: 0.7.0
>            Reporter: Martin Kleppmann
>            Assignee: Martin Kleppmann
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: SAMZA-136-v1.html, SAMZA-136-v1.patch, SAMZA-136-v2.patch, dag.png, group-by-example.png
>
>
> The documentation at http://samza.incubator.apache.org/learn/documentation/0.7.0/ is good in terms of content, but would benefit from a bit of editing to make it smoother to read. I am happy to go through it.



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