[GitHub] [activemq-website] clebertsuconic commented on a change in pull request #34: Update OpenLogic commercial support offering verbiage

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clebertsuconic commented on a change in pull request #34:
URL: https://github.com/apache/activemq-website/pull/34#discussion_r520600988



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File path: src/support.md
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@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ This is an open source project, so the amount of time we have available to help
 *   [Amazon Web Services](https://aws.amazon.com/) provides [Amazon MQ](https://aws.amazon.com/amazon-mq/), a managed message broker service for Apache ActiveMQ in the cloud. Amazon MQ manages the work involved in setting up an ActiveMQ message broker, from provisioning the infrastructure capacity you request–including server instances and storage–to installing the broker software itself. Once your broker is up and running, Amazon MQ automates common administrative tasks such as patching the operating system and ActiveMQ software
 *   [Media Driver](http://mediadriver.com) provides consulting services and management tools for Apache ActiveMQ and the Apache Integration stack for both the commercial and public sector.  We bring a full suite of project delivery services including business and technical analysis, proof of concepts, architectural guidance, best practice integration, and project management.  Media Driver offers training classes for developers and administrators, as well as middleware management software.
 *   [HYTE](https://hyte.io/activemq-support/) Under the Apache License, HYTE offers HYTE MQ, an Open Source package of Apache ActiveMQ, which provides enterprises a single distribution to support all DevOps pipelines and allows deployment in any environment: containers, cloud and on-premise. HYTE MQ is pre-configured with deployment and consulting best practices to ensure stability and ease of maintenance.  HYTE’s commercial offerings include: HYTE Console which provides a self-service, multi-tenant management capability across ActiveMQ and IBM MQ deployments, numerous production support packages, multi-platform message bridging, and consulting services.
-*   [OpenLogic](http://www.openlogic.com/) by Perforce has a team of ActiveMQ, Camel, and Kafka experts ready to help you. We provide 24/7 support for troubleshooting issues and outages, consulting on architecture and design, and instructor-led, hands-on training. In addition to supporting many Apache packages, OpenLogic’s enterprise architects have expertise in over 400 open source packages.
+*   [OpenLogic](http://www.openlogic.com/) by Perforce has a team of ActiveMQ experts ready to help you. We provide 24/7 support for troubleshooting issues and outages, consulting on architecture and design, and instructor-led, hands-on training. In addition to supporting many Apache packages, OpenLogic’s enterprise architects have expertise in over 400 open source packages.

Review comment:
       You're mixing 1st person with 3rd person on this sentence..
   
   
   Can you update it to They?
   
   You're adding this text in the name of the community.. so, it should be They here...
   
   (not trying to make a big deal about this... I could edit this myself if you can't do it).
   
   
   Also... it would be nice if you could squash your commits into one:
   
   do the following commands please:
   
   ```sh
   # this one if you don't have the remote
   git remote add upstream https://github.com/apache/activemq-website.git
   
   git pull --rebase upstream master
   # this could be ~3 if you add another commit
   git rebase HEAD~2
   # now you use the editor to squash all commits into a single one.. use a single commit text on it
   
   git push origin -f <your-branch-name>
   ```




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