svn commit: r886308 - in /websites/staging/community/trunk/content: ./ newcomers/index.html

[bu...@apache.org]

Author: buildbot
Date: Tue Nov 12 13:04:21 2013
New Revision: 886308

Log:
Staging update by buildbot for community

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    websites/staging/community/trunk/content/newcomers/index.html

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@@ -153,9 +153,9 @@
 </ul>
    <hr>
     <p>In this section we hope to help you take your first steps as an open source 
-developer in the Apache community.</p>
+developer in one of our many Apache project communities.</p>
 <ul>
-<li><a href="/gettingStarted/101.html">Where do I start?</a> - a guide to your first engagement with and Apache project</li>
+<li><a href="/gettingStarted/101.html">Where do I start?</a> - a guide to your first engagement with an Apache project</li>
 <li><a href="/mentoringprogramme.html">Mentoring Programme</a> - an introduction to our mentoring programme<ul>
 <li><a href="/mentorprogrammeformaleducation.html">Mentoring in formal education</a> - how to engage your students on open source</li>
 </ul>
@@ -171,11 +171,11 @@ you have little to offer the ASF. Howeve
 how much you can help, even now. </p>
 <p>Since we aim to be a place for newcomers to learn
 about the ASF as a whole and you are (probably) a newcomer <em>any feedback
-you can give or unanswered questions you can ask</em> will help us improve what
+you can give or unanswered questions you can ask us here</em> will help us improve what
 we offer to those who come afterwards. </p>
-<p>Feedback can be provided and questions asked by subscribing to our mailing
+<p>Feedback can be provided on this website and questions asked about anything Apache by subscribing to our mailing
 list by sending a mail to 
-<a href="mailto:dev-subscribe@community.apache.org">dev-subscribe@community.apache.org</a>. Once subscribe you can send your mail to
+<a href="mailto:dev-subscribe@community.apache.org">dev-subscribe@community.apache.org</a>. Once subscribed you can send your mail to
 <a href="mailto:dev@community.apache.org">dev@community.apache.org</a>.</p>
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