svn commit: r393540 - /db/derby/docs/trunk/src/adminguide/cadminnetservsecurity.dita

[jt...@apache.org]

Author: jta
Date: Wed Apr 12 10:29:22 2006
New Revision: 393540

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?rev=393540&view=rev
Log:
DERBY-1207 Halley Pacheco de Oliveira's patch improves the wording in 
the Derby Server and Administration Guide's "Network Server security" 
section that describes how to start the network server with the 
-h 0.0.0.0 option.

Modified:
    db/derby/docs/trunk/src/adminguide/cadminnetservsecurity.dita

Modified: db/derby/docs/trunk/src/adminguide/cadminnetservsecurity.dita
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/db/derby/docs/trunk/src/adminguide/cadminnetservsecurity.dita?rev=393540&r1=393539&r2=393540&view=diff
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--- db/derby/docs/trunk/src/adminguide/cadminnetservsecurity.dita (original)
+++ db/derby/docs/trunk/src/adminguide/cadminnetservsecurity.dita Wed Apr 12 10:29:22 2006
@@ -40,13 +40,11 @@
 <p>To start the Network Server so that it will listen on all interfaces, start
 with an IP address of <codeph><i>0.0.0.0</i></codeph>, shown in the following
 example:  <codeblock><b>java org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl start -h 0.0.0.0</b></codeblock></p>
-<p>A server that is started with the <codeph><i>0.0.0.0</i></codeph> option
+<p>A server that is started with the <codeph><i>-h 0.0.0.0</i></codeph> option
 will listen to client requests that originate from both <codeph><i>localhost</i></codeph> and
 from other machines on the network.</p>
-<p>In addition, administrative commands (for example, <codeph><i>org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl
+<p>However, administrative commands (for example, <codeph><i>org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl
 shutdown</i></codeph>) can run only on the host where the server was started,
 even if the server was started with the <codeph><i>-h</i></codeph> option.</p>
-<p></p>
-<p></p>
 </conbody>
 </concept>