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[Impala-ASF-CR] [DOCS] Genericize admission config noncm page

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  http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/6391

Change subject: [DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page
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[DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page

A couple of fleeting / invisible references to 'cm'.
Take 'em out to avoid false positives in our grep reports.

Change-Id: Ia510a1eb53eba2f1127f57fa1f8bfe39525e0613
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M docs/topics/impala_admission.xml
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 3 deletions(-)


  git pull ssh://gerrit.cloudera.org:29418/Impala-ASF refs/changes/91/6391/1
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[Impala-ASF-CR] [DOCS] Genericize admission config noncm page

Posted by "Laurel Hale (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Change subject: [DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page
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Patch Set 1:

I looked at the source and the comma is outside the <q> tag. It's not super critical, but an English wog like me noticed it. :-)

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[Impala-ASF-CR] [DOCS] Genericize admission config noncm page

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
John Russell has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: [DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page
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Patch Set 1: Code-Review+2

(1 comment)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6391/1/docs/topics/impala_admission.xml
File docs/topics/impala_admission.xml:

PS1, Line 38: .
> Period should be placed within the double quotation marks for American Engl
The purpose of the <q> tag is to enclose only the text in question. The transform can then decide whether to move any punctuation inside the quotation marks in the output. (It may not actually be implemented in the DITA-OT transform, but that's the way it has traditionally worked.)


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[Impala-ASF-CR] [DOCS] Genericize admission config noncm page

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Change subject: [DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page
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Patch Set 1:

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[Impala-ASF-CR] [DOCS] Genericize admission config noncm page

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Change subject: [DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page
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Patch Set 1: Verified+1

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[Impala-ASF-CR] [DOCS] Genericize admission config noncm page

Posted by "Impala Public Jenkins (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Change subject: [DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page
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[DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page

A couple of fleeting / invisible references to 'cm'.
Take 'em out to avoid false positives in our grep reports.

Change-Id: Ia510a1eb53eba2f1127f57fa1f8bfe39525e0613
Reviewed-on: http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/6391
Reviewed-by: Laurel Hale <la...@cloudera.com>
Reviewed-by: John Russell <jr...@cloudera.com>
Tested-by: Impala Public Jenkins
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M docs/topics/impala_admission.xml
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 3 deletions(-)

Approvals:
  Impala Public Jenkins: Verified
  Laurel Hale: Looks good to me, but someone else must approve
  John Russell: Looks good to me, approved



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[Impala-ASF-CR] [DOCS] Genericize admission config noncm page

Posted by "Laurel Hale (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
Laurel Hale has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: [DOCS] Genericize admission_config_noncm page
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Patch Set 1: Code-Review+1

(1 comment)

Files build cleanly, displays as expected in html & pdf, and source XML is clean. Only one small foobar where the comman should be placed within the quotations marks, but marking this +1.

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6391/1/docs/topics/impala_admission.xml
File docs/topics/impala_admission.xml:

PS1, Line 38: .
Period should be placed within the double quotation marks for American English.


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